1. Mistakenly referred to as “Quantum Kid.”
2. Actually an Alien Race, but uniformly treated as Villains.
3. Actually a computer voice connected to a holocam – a primitive robot – but tracked as a character because it interacts with Trudy.
5. Only noted when they occur as a story point, apart from any character who might happen to be wearing them.
| General | Due to the costume used by Wildfire in this issue, this story is deemed to occur prior to The Legion #34. |
| Cover | This storyline features a different, “hot” artist on the cover of each issue. |
| 1:1 | Captions throughout are from Trudy Trusoe and count as dialogue for her. They are actually her handwritten report on the event, done after the fact. |
| Trudy only being 21 is at first a bit surprising, but this just puts her as a peer (or perhaps a year or two older) of the Legionnaires. | |
| “Spike” is the attack done by Canary, amped up on the presence of Nura. It produces a self-feeding EMP (electromagnetic pulse). | |
| 1:2 | The implication here is that artificial organs are commonplace in the 31st century. Likely, though, is that Pinter has a form of obsessive-compulsive disorder, perhaps with a touch of paranoia: he is fearful both of organ failure and artificial implants, so he goes way overboard. |
| The way Pinter’s face is a patchwork of different skin tones here indicates that he does more than replace his own organs. He looks like an amalgam of his victims; perhaps he has the power to replace portions of his body with those of other people. | |
| 1:3 | “The rift” would be a single entry point for Oasis One, a hole in their defensive screens. |
| Pinter must be quite dangerous if the preferred method of transport for him is a single Legionnaire, as opposed to a shuttle with a crew of Science Police officers. | |
| The lack of mention of the main prison world of the galaxy, Takron-Galtos, is telling: after the stargate network collapsed, Takron-Galtos fell into disuse. Transporting criminals there via the Footstep Drive would have been wasteful. It will perhaps be reinstituted after the events of this story. | |
| 2 | Oasis One presumably moves to various locations over and around Metropolis: within range of the Presidential destruct signal, but never blocking anyone’s sky view for long. |
| 3:2 | Of course she does. Before being a Legionnaire, Tinya served as an aide to her mother, who was then an ambassador to the United Planets from Bgztl. |
| 3:4 | “Inferno hot” is probably no reference to WorkForce member Inferno, still lost somewhere in the 21st century. On the other hand, Trudy is wearing colors along the same lines. |
| That is presumably the cloaked Oasis One high above the city. | |
| 4:1 | Winema is using a levitating mirror. Better, though, would be a holographic one, something which would let you see yourself from all angles, including the back. |
| “In plain sight”: Later in the story, Winema gets shot as part of an assassination attempt, and the indications in future issues are that she dies, but such occurs off-panel and is not verbalized. One theory was that this line was foreshadowing, indicating that the Durlan aide might replace Winema at some point, either before or after the assassination attempt, perhaps based on information about the impending attack (or even that the assassination was set up by Winema herself). Who better to have as a stand in than a Durlan, and who better to help enable such a switch than a Bgztler? And it would not be the first time a Durlan has imitated Winema, either (Chameleon did so in the sting on President Chu). | |
| 4:4 | Brainy is aware of the need for public recognition and the like. He is probably being kept from a specific experiment he is involved in. The theory about foreknowledge of the assassination attempt included that this dialogue was also foreshadowing. |
| 5:1 | Interlac: “me----oli” and “opology”. The same text as is above in English (Metropolis Museum of Anthropology), partially blocked by the Legion holo monument. |
| “Telepathic napalm”: perhaps a “mental defoliant,” something that strips the “leaves” from the brain. | |
| There are nine figures visible on the platform, here, and nine sere seen in 4:1, so despite only being able to clearly identify Brainiac 5, all nine are counted as appearing. (Most likely, the three to the far right are Tinya, Winema, and Taan.) | |
| 5:2 | Why the concern about the openness of the venue? This again seemed to be foreshadowing something more than just the assassination attempt, perhaps that the Legionnaires were there in case of a problem? |
| 5:3 | This reporter is Vigo Toosalembli, but he should be colored blue. |
| 6:4 | Arrow is singing Verdi’s “Va, pensiero” (“Chorus of the Hebrew Slaves”) from the opera Nabucco. It became a song of Italian liberal nationalism, focused on unification with Lombardy, then controlled by Austria. These particular lines translate as “Or else be inspired by the Lord / To fortify us to endure our suffering.” Here, it apparently refers to an attempt to throw down the United Planets and return Earth to a “better” state. |
| 6:5-6 | Winema is wearing a “frameless glasses,” presumably held on by gravimetric or magnetic means. In 17:2, she is seen to be still wearing them but with a bar across the bridge of the nose. The implication thus is that technology is used to hide the bridge, and when Canary’s cry shuts down technology in Metropolis, the bridge of the glasses simply becomes visible again. |
| 7:2 | Seen here at the base of the hologram are Violet (miscolored as Winema), Chameleon, Apparition, Umbra, Ultra Boy, and Timber Wolf. |
| The bar through Kid Quantum’s foot indicates the changing nature of the holographic display. The pale yellow is just a bit too pale for easy clarity. | |
| 7:3 | Violet would know from big. |
| 8:1 | The Legion logos on the wall are for Ferro Lad, Chameleon, Wildfire (a radiation symbol), Timber Wolf, XS, Kid Quantum, Live Wire, Ultra Boy, and Saturn Girl. |
| 8:3 | Here we also see logos for Phantom Girl (the dotted nature doesn’t come through well here), Violet (a flower), Invisible Kid, and Star Boy. |
| 8:5 | “Jump up here and chew some scenery with me! There’s enough for two of us, easy!” Devil is apparently a loony. This makes her motivations that much harder to fathom. |
| 9:1 | “Indoc Center”: Indoctrination Center. Probably just the prisoner intake office. |
| The woman is named Lialla, as revealed next issue. | |
| 9:2-3 | If Pinter does his organ replacement via metahuman powers, he may indeed bite, literally eating the parts he is adding to himself. |
| 9:5 | No, the Persuader from the Martian uvula band, The N’illyons. How many Persuaders do you know? (Actually, Val’s surprise is probably that the Persuader was here on Earth, and that the Legionnaires didn’t know it. The Fatal Five were captured on Tenazor-4 and presumably locked up on Takron-Galtos again, although Tharok is known to have escaped, undoubtedly via the machinations of C.O.M.P.U.T.O.) |
| 10:1 | Oasis Cell ADV-352: The Persuader first appeared in Adventure Comics #352. |
| 10:5 | It’s probably not the ugly rash on Lialla’s face which makes him want to puke, although what that is caused by remains unknown. It is possible that her presence really does make him want to puke, due to some posthypnotic suggestion or the like. |
| We don’t yet know the Persuader’s true origin – he may or may not be Cole Parker from the 21st century – and it’s likely that he doesn’t (or doesn’t want to) remember whatever situation led to Lialla’s birth (assuming she’s telling the truth about his daughter, of course). | |
| 11:1 | No, “cutesick” is this kind of portmanteau language. |
| 11:2 | “Holy Mole-y” is a reference to the star-shaped mole on Dreamer’s cheek. And to 21st century hero Captain Marvel, of course. |
| 12:4 | How would Devil know this, since Dreamer is the first precog on Naltor in several generations (per Legionnaires #<47>)? Perhaps Canary’s power is hereditary and her ancestors interacted with Nura’s (and perhaps led to the recessive nature of the precog abilities). |
| Canary’s powers must be able to reverse the temporal nature of Dreamer’s precognition, making time equal to space, and thus pushing Canary’s power effect “seconds” away from its source. | |
| 12:5 | Arrow is using martial arts skills to rupture the Science Police officer’s armor, but he probably isn’t actually driving his hand into the guy’s chest. |
| 13:2 | Arrow is leaping back to the same platform he left from, where the rifle is still at. |
| 13:4 | This is the last time Taan is seen. Perhaps he is actually a holographic projection and gets shut off when Canary’s power turns off all the tech in that part of the city? |
| 14:1 | Ooh, hot lesbian action! |
| 14:1 | This is Ultra Boy’s flight ring, since he and Umbra are the only Legionnaires involved who are not seen on this page, and the hand certainly isn’t hers. (And his may be being actively used at the moment.) |
| 14:9 | Winema probably should have automatically phased, rather than be hit by the holocam. Then again, her powers and attention isn’t as honed as Tinya’s are. |
| 15:2 | The symbols behind Gear are Dreamer (should be off), XS, Karate Kid, two unknowns, Star Boy, Chameleon, M’Onel (should be on), Ferro, Umbra, Ultra Boy, two unknowns, Timber Wolf, Live Wire, Invisible Kid, Violet, Saturn Girl, Wildfire, two unknowns, Kinetix (note the crescent moon), Brainiac 5, and Kid Quantum. |
| 15:5 | Again, Winema should have automatically phased, like Tinya did, but she was dazed by the holocam. Of course, the theory mentioned above had it that she did not phase because she was actually Taan posing at Winema. |
| 16:4 | It’s not clear what Lantern’s comment about Violet not fighting back means. |
| 16:5 | Well, Umbra, start by wrapping everything in shadow… |
| 17:1 | The Blight invaded earth in Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #121. |
| The character with white skin in the crowd is no one special, despite the coloring (or lack of same) making him stick out boldly. | |
| 19:3 | This is a reference to the preboot madness which affected Brainiac 5. |
| Brainiac 5 returned from the Fires of Creation with those implants, which he referred to as an “upgrade”, although we never learned just what that meant. Umbra also returned with a power boost (the ability to make her shadows solid) and Kinetix returned nearly catatonic (but that may have also been a symptom of changes invoked by the Fires). What changes were caused in Andromeda, M’Onel, and Gates have never been revealed. | |
| 20:3 | That is Violet’s symbol being crossed out. |
| 20:5 | More likely, the threshold equipment can’t verify that a threshold has been successfully created, and without that, the navigators dare not try to go through. |
| Wildfire is wearing his old outfit here, not the new one introduced in The Legion #34. Since that one presumedly replaced a destroyed one, this indicates that this story occurs after this storyline, after The Legion #38 (and presumedly prior to Teen Titans #15, although that remains to be verified). | |
22:5 |
“Spike plus ten minutes”: it has taken this long for the dead zone to expand to the height of Oasis One. |
Character Name |
Cover |
Panels / Speaking |
| Heroes | ||
| Karate Kid (Val Armorr) | 20 / 13 | |
| Umbra (Tasmia Mallor) | 12 / 4 | |
| Ultra Boy (Jo Nah) | 8 / 2 | |
| Chameleon (Reep Daggle) | 13 / 4 | |
| Apparition (Tinya Wazzo-Nah) | 19 / 7 | |
| Violet (Salu Digby) | 14 / 3 | |
| Brainiac 5 (Querl Dox) | 12 / 6 | |
| Timber Wolf (Brin Londo) | 9 / 3 | |
| Gear (I.Z.O.R.) | 4 / 3 | |
| Dreamer (Nura Nal) | X | 11 / 1 |
| Kid Quantum II (Jazmin Cullen) |
1 / 0 | |
| Cosmic Boy (Rokk Krinn) |
1 / 0 | |
| Ferro (Andrew Nolan) |
1 / 0 | |
| Spark (Ayla Ranzz) |
1 / 0 | |
| M’Onel (Lar Gand) |
1 / 0 | |
| Wildfire (“Drake Burroughs”) |
2 / 2 | |
| Villains | ||
| Persuader (real name unrevealed) | 6 / 2 | |
| Organ Thief (Pinter DeRoy) |
13 / 5 | |
| Arrow (real name unrevealed) |
7 / 7 | |
| Devil (real name unrevealed) | X | 11 / 19 |
| Canary (real name unrevealed) |
6 / 2 | |
| Lantern (real name unrevealed) |
4 / 4 | |
| Supporting Characters | ||
| Trudy Trusoe | 12 / 27 | |
| President Winema Wazzo | 20 / 13 | |
| Chuck Taine | 5 / 6 | |
| Vigo Toosalembli | 1 / 1 | |
| Taan (Durlan aide) | 4 / 3 | |
| Three (holocam) | 2 / 2 | |
| Sgt. Renslie (Science Police) | 6 / 8 | |
| Lialla (Persuader’s daughter) |
9 / 7 | |