The Legion #4

The Legion #4 cover

Date:

March 2002

Title:

“Moon Rise”
(Cover Title: “Standing Tall!”)

Plot:

In the Footstep Drive Research Annex, the source of the Footstep Drive is revealed to be genetic experimentation on Gates and other United Planets citizens.  A team of Legionnaires frees the prisoners, only to be stopped outside by the Science Police.  Ra’s al Ghul and Venge discuss the plans for terraforming the moon, and then Ra’s al Ghul goes to take care of M’Onel, by shooting him with a lead bullet under red solar lights.  In Kwai-Space, Saturn Girl’s team finds energized rocks where Live Wire and Progenitor died, and then are confronted by warrior Kwai.  Kinetix and her partner are caught in an explosion.  On Xanthu, XS and Star Boy continue to fight a losing battle against Robotica.  And Venge’s fleet finds Legion World and attacks, seemingly blowing it up.

Credits:

Dan Abnett / Andy Lanning (Writer) • Olivier Coipel (Pencils) • Andy Lanning (Inks) • Tom McCraw (Colors) • Digital Chameleon (Separations) • Comicraft (Letters) • Mike McAvennie (Editor) • Olivier Coipel / Andy Lanning / Richard and Tanya Horie (Cover)


CHANGE HISTORY

Date of Change
Content of Change
10/07/02
Posted
06/11/03
Name correction

Tinted cells and text indicate missing or incomplete information.

Character and Object Tracking

         

Name

Previous Appearance

Next Appearance

Heroes

Gates (Ti’julk Mr’asz) Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #125 The Legion #6
Leviathan II (Salu Digby) The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Brainiac 5 (Querl Dox) The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Triad (Luornu Durgo) The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Cosmic Boy (Rokk Krinn) The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Chameleon (Reep Daggle)
     (also appears as a giant armadillo)
The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Kid Quantum II (Jazmin Cullen) The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Shikari The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Ultra Boy (Jo Nah) The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Invisible Kid (Lyle Norg) The Legion #3 The Legion #5
Saturn Girl (Imra Ardeen) The Legion #3 The Legion #5
Spark (Ayla Ranzz) The Legion #3 The Legion #5
Wildfire (“Drake Burroughs”) The Legion #3 The Legion #5
M’Onel (Lar Gand)
     (also referred to as Valor)
The Legion #3 The Legion #6
XS (Jenni Ognats) Legion Worlds #4 (story #1) The Legion #6
Star Boy (Thom Kallor) Legion Worlds #4 (story #1) The Legion #6
Sensor (Princess Jeka Wynzorr) The Legion #3 The Legion #8
Umbra (Tasmia Mallor) The Legion #3 The Legion #8
Gear (I.Z.O.R.)
The Legion #3 The Legion #8
 
One-shot or Unnamed Heroes:
     Superman (“The Icon”), Batman (“The Detective”), Wonder Woman (“The Amazon Queen”)

Villains

Ra’s al Ghul
     (also appears as President Leland McCauley)
The Legion #3 The Legion #6
C.O.M.P.U.T.O.
     (appears only as Mr. Venge)
The Legion #3 The Legion #7
Herros (Kwai) None The Legion #5
Roboticans (footnote #1)
Legion Worlds #4 (story #1) The Legion #6

Supporting Characters

President Leland McCauley No appearance; mention only
Junior Officer Zoe Saugin Legion Worlds #1 (story #1) The Legion #6
Chuck Taine The Legion #3 The Legion #8
R.J. Brande
The Legion #3 The Legion #8
 
Darren (footnote #2) None None to date
Leos (Kwai) None The Legion #5
Officer Cill
None None to date
 
One-shot or Untracked Characters:
     assorted Footstep Drive Research Annex staff
     unnamed Terraformer staff (at least 6)
     assorted Footstep Drive Research Annex test subjects
     unnamed Kwai warrior
     unnamed Science Police dispatcher
     unnamed EarthGov naval officer
     assorted Science Police officers

Locations

Cargg No appearance; mention only
Winath No appearance; mention only
Luna The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Kwai-Space The Legion #3 The Legion #5
Rosette (remains) The Legion #3 The Legion #5
Xanthu (planet and surface) Legion Worlds #4 (story #1) The Legion #6
Robotica Baseworld No appearance; mention only
Legion World The Legion #3 The Legion #8
Talok VIII No appearance; mention only
Vyrga
No appearance; mention only
 
Footstep Drive Research Annex (interior and exterior), Metropolis None None to date
United Planets Presidential Tower (interior and exterior, plus surrounding buildings), Metropolis The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Lunar Terraformer (exterior) The Legion #3 The Legion #7
Legion Outpost Cullen No appearance; mention only
Red solar prison None The Legion #6
Climate Control, Earth No appearance; mention only
Mission Monitor Room, Legion World The Legion #3 The Legion #10
Metropolis
The Legion #3 < >
 
One-shot or Untracked Locations:
     Terraforming chamber, United Planets Presidential Tower
     Swan Boulevard, Metropolis
     Bridwell Square, Metropolis
     medi-center (hospital)

Alien Races and Creatures

Vyrgan No appearance; mention only
Winathian Legion Worlds #2 (story #1) None to date
Carggite
< > None to date

Technology

Image inducer The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Footstep Drive ship No appearance; mention only
Legion cruiser The Legion #3 The Legion #5
Omnicom The Legion #3 The Legion #6
Tromium crystals Legion Lost #12 The Legion #5
Kwai fire staves None The Legion #5
Gravcars (Science Police) The Legion #1 The Legion #6
EarthGov battlecruisers
None The Legion #10
 
One-shot or Untracked Items:
     laser cage with damping field
     keyfob
     laser hypodermic needle
     emergency lights
     revolver
     holo billboards

1. Tracked as a Villain due to the species’ overall role.

2. Listed as a Supporting Character because he is just an employee, despite being aware of the problematic nature of his job.

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Analysis Notes

1:1 Darren is greeting his coworkers, the ones whom the Legionnaires pound on before page 4.
The text on the door should have been in Interlac.
1:3 The Interlac on each door is the translation of the English text below it.
1:5 It’s not clear why the lunar terraforming would mark the end of the Footstep Drive project.  (Well, for Ra’s al Ghul, it makes sense, but it doesn’t follow why he would project that information to anyone outside his immediate staff.)
2:5 First reaction is “How could the power go out?  Especially since it’s of vital importance that the likes of Gates not get free.  There must be redundant generators and such, right?”  Second reaction is “Oh, wait.  Brainy is with the team on this mission.  He’ll have dealt with such redundancies, and easily.”
5:1-2 Note that Ra’s al Ghul is speaking to someone remotely, not to Venge here.
5:3 While Venge knowing that McCauley is Ra’s al Ghul is no surprise (and in fact is known after the end of the previous issue), there are at least six other people here.  How open of a secret has his identity been?  (Then again, they are presumably all faithful lieutenants in the Demon’s organization, not just Joe Random Technician off the street.)
6:3 “I’ve never seen you do that before.  Stop it.  It scares me.”
6:4 Not longer than Venge can imagine.  As seen in The Legion #11, Venge is actually C.O.M.P.U.T.O., survived since the 20th century.  Well, perhaps still somewhat longer than Venge can imagine, but less longer than Ra’s al Ghul thinks.
Note the double entendre of the “true face” comment, coming from the disguised C.O.M.P.U.T.O.
6:6 C.O.M.P.U.T.O. perhaps can’t be afraid.
7:4 “I have time”: actually, he probably only has until moonrise, but this is more of a reference to “I’ve had time to learn how to deal with Daxamites.”
8:1 Dialogue is from Leviathan.
8:3 “Subterfuge Team”: oblique reference to the Legion of Substitute Heroes.
Many of the prisoners here look alike because they are Winathian or Carggite.
8:6 There’s more to the story of Gates being Vyrga’s sole teleporter than that.  He is also an independent thinker — most Vyrgans are part of a hive society — and a scientist; Gates gave himself his powers.  Another Vyrgan, Mantis Morlo, attempted to duplicate the effect, but ended up mutating himself and creating the Proties instead.  At least one other Vyrgan, a criminal, developed some form of the powers, which were later distilled into the Tac-ring originally used by Klen Rokkart (in Legion: Science Police) and currently possessed by Abyss of the Oversight Watch.  These three cases together point to the teleportation possibly being a race-wide latent ability; EarthGov presumably couldn’t make use of the Tac-ring on a broad scale.
9:2 Curiously, there had been no such rumblings from Winath about missing persons, and it was on Winath in Legion Worlds #2 (story #2) that we first heard about the Cargg situation.  Perhaps Carggites proved more usable and those were taken in far larger numbers than Winathians.
9:3 Brainy is having to carry Gates.  This and the silhouette in 10:4 imply that the experimentation on him might have been so severe as to constitute vivisection, cutting off entire pieces of his body.  Gates seems to recover fairly well over the next couple issues, though, so he is probably merely weak from captivity but not injured.
10:3 The inset of Triad counts as a separate panel.
10:4 Brainy and Cosmic Boy seem a bit surprised by Triad’s statement, or by her intensity.
The silhouettes are Brainy carrying Gates, the merged Triad, Cosmic Boy with two guards, Shikari, Chameleon with one of the prisoners, Leviathan, Ultra Boy, and Kid Quantum bending over a guard.
10:5 Recall that the Legionnaires found the skeletons of McCauley and Amelia Crugg in the Metropolis sewers in The Legion #2.
11:1 Dialogue is from Invisible Kid.
11:3 These are the remains of the Rosette, destroyed in the battle between Progenitor and the Omniphagos, and then further when Live Wire destroyed the combined creature.
11:4 Perhaps it’s just a nostalgia thing, or just being used to comics being a bit conservative, but “My lover” just doesn’t feel right from the teenage Saturn Girl; it should be “My boyfriend” or even “My fiancée.”  Then again, there were cases of Legionnaires referring to their boyfriends/girlfriends as “lover” in the early 1980s and even before.
12:1-2 Just energized rocks?  No, they are tromium crystals — the same substance Element Lad had turned himself into as Progenitor — and they are energized by a lightning-like power.  In other words, this is presumably what is left of the fused Progenitor and Omniphagos, infused with and ruptured by Live Wire’s power.
Some fans wondered why the Legion was going back to Kwai-Space so soon.  (Never mind that it had been ten months; Legion Worlds gets forgotten easily since it wasn’t generally moving the main plot forward.)  Since most everyone “knows” (suspects, hopes) that Live Wire and Element Lad aren’t really dead — you know how death and comics are — this venture can be seen as a way of putting a nail in Garth and Jan’s coffin: “See, we went back to where they did and all we found was rocks.  They’re dead.”
12:5 Per the next issue, the Kwai with the orange loincloth is Leos, the one in purple is Herros, and the third Kwai is not named.
13:2 While he was exploring the universe as Valor, Lar had a ship called Babbage which was supplied by Lex Luthor.  M’Onel’s knowledge of Ra’s al Ghul probably comes from that time rather than from brief glimpses out of the Stasis Zone.
13:4 Does Ra’s al Ghul know that M’Onel is Valor because he remembers the actual seeding, or from McCauley’s records, or because Venge (actually C.O.M.P.U.T.O., who would know) told him, or just because he’s smart enough to put two and two together?  Could be any of these.
14:2 Ra’s al Ghul is referring to Superman, Batman, and Wonder Woman here.  Curious that he would refer to Superman before his arch-enemy Batman.
“Icon” was the name of the Superman-inspired black hero of the Milestone comics line.  Icon himself was originally slated to be called Paragon, a name in use by Americomics.
14:4 Note what a 20th century revolver will shoot: a lead bullet.  Nothing better for killing Daxamites, is there?
14:5 M’Onel seemed quite done in by the red solar lights at the end of the previous issue, when Ra’s al Ghul was able to punch him into unconsciousness.  The other instance of red solar lights used on Daxamites (Brainiac 5 on Andromeda in < >) also had a sudden effect.  Now however, apparently some hours later, M’Onel still has significant invulnerability.  Barring some super-strength on Ra’s al Ghul’s part in The Legion #3, perhaps the best explanation is that Daxamites utilize yellow solar radiation in two ways: for immediate power and as an ongoing power source, and it takes a brief time to shift between the two.  Thus, the sudden exposure to red solar radiation serves to strip out all of a Daxamites powers for a brief moment — long enough to stop them in their tracks and get the tar beat out of them — and then the reserve energy will slowly take over, supplying some residual powers.  Extended exposure to red solar radiation will sap those reserves over the course of a few hours, lessening the power available to the individual.
This shadow counts as an appearance of Ra’s al Ghul.
15:1 “Swan Boulevard” is named for Legion creator Curt Swan.
The signs read “terraforming? no thanks!”, “stop the [terra]form[ing]”, and “leave our moon alone!”  This is a protest march against the McCauley Administration’s lunar terraforming initiative.
15:2 “Bridwell Square” is named for Legion creator E. Nelson Bridwell.
That is a holo billboard beyond the gravcars.
The tubes out the backs of the Science Police gravcars are probably afterburners, allowing a burst of extreme speed to get the SP’s to where they need to go quickly.
16:3 Cill’s profile here, with the sloping brow and jutting chin, has a strong resemblance to the art of gay erotic artist Etienne (Dom Orejudos.).
16:4 The sign says “stop the terraforming”.
Dialogue from the gravcar is from Zoe.
16:5 This is apparently caused by the lunar terraformer.
17:2-3 Only scenes where actual Robotica constructs appear count as appearances from Robotica, despite the huge columns from space being part of the species, too.
18:2, 18:4, 18:6 These speed traces count as appearances for XS since we know she is there at the head of them.
18:5 Thank goodness Jenni ditched that stupid looking helmet from Legion Worlds #4 (story #1).  The jacket and kneepads, those are a bit better.
This sort of pairing of powers is something seldom seen before with the Legion, but an idea which has great merit.  Imagine Saturn Girl and Dream Girl working in tangent, or more obviously, Cosmic Boy and Ferro.
19:1 Dialogue is from Sensor.
19:2 Love the side comment from Sensor.
Is the return to “disco swimsuits” a sign of the postboot Legion maturing?
19:3 The most likely explanation continues to be that, a year after her disappearance, the tribal elders have granted the shadow powers to someone else (probably a cousin named Grev), which withdraws them from Tasmia.
20:1 As indicated earlier in the issue, a homing signal from the Footstep Drive ship which the Legion stole is what led Venge and company to the Zatar Nebula.  Such a homing signal is probably fairly standard equipment, allowing rescue ships to track down a missing ship in the vastness of space (as occurs for the ship Apparition and Timber Wolf are stranded on in The Legion #9).
20:5 Ultra Boy is between Chameleon and Cosmic Boy.
21:1 Chameleon is on the left edge of the panel.
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Appearance Counts

Character Name

Cover

Panels / Speaking

Heroes
Gates (Ti’julk Mr’asz) 13 / 18
Leviathan II (Salu Digby) X 5 / 3
Brainiac 5 (Querl Dox) X 7 / 7
Triad (Luornu Durgo)
     (also appears as Triad-Purple,
     Triad-Orange, and
     Triad-Neutral)

X



4 / 4
2 / 2
2 / 0
2 / 0
Cosmic Boy (Rokk Krinn) X 4 / 2
Chameleon (Reep Daggle)
     (also appears as a giant armadillo)
X
3 / 0
1 / 1
Kid Quantum II (Jazmin Cullen) X 1 / 1
Shikari X 2 / 0
Ultra Boy (Jo Nah) X 3 / 1
Invisible Kid (Lyle Norg) 7 / 3
Saturn Girl (Imra Ardeen) 8 / 7
Spark (Ayla Ranzz) 8 / 4
Wildfire (“Drake Burroughs”) 7 / 3
M’Onel (Lar Gand) 9 / 6
XS (Jenni Ognats) 4 / 2
Star Boy (Thom Kallor) 2 / 1
Sensor (Princess Jeka Wynzorr) 3 / 2
Umbra (Tasmia Mallor) 4 / 2
Gear (I.Z.O.R.)
2 / 0
Villains
Ra’s al Ghul
     (also appears as President Leland McCauley)
18 / 15
7 / 6
C.O.M.P.U.T.O.
     (appears only as Mr. Venge)
0 / 0
11 / 10
Herros (Kwai) 1 / 0
Robotica
4 / 2
Supporting Characters
Junior Officer Zoe Saugin 6 / 7
Chuck Taine 3 / 1
R.J. Brande 3 / 2
 
Darren 11 / 10
Leos (Kwai) 1 / 0
Officer Cill
5 / 5
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